Reviews from

Debra Allen

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Date Story Comments from Debra Allen Gentle's response Rating
15/07/2006 7:30:28 p.m. Picture This 2 Ha-Ha!! Looks like this guy isn't done yet~ What a delightful story and ending. Can't help but wonder what Lisa thinks of all this....... Gee Gentle.... your talent never disappoints~ Shucks. :-)
19/04/2006 3:15:25 p.m. Digitally Part 4 Excellent Story........just what I'd expect from Gentle. I think I'll forward this link to my man....*wink* Care to tell out what happened with that?
19/04/2006 3:08:02 p.m. Liberty Very Sweet.........Nice story........but I'll have to admit, I'm a bit bothered by the age difference. (But you have to cut me some slack....I work in law enforcement. :P) All opinions appreciated! I wanted to give Liberty something special, and that's how Tom turned out, but thanks for letting me know what you think!
3/12/2005 12:38:55 p.m. The Game - Part 3 - Taking your turn *giggle* and yes....Birch is definitely *****. As for Heather......I'd have done this... Sorry about the bleeps. Didn't want to give the story away.
19/11/2005 8:11:32 p.m. The Game - Part 1 - Opening Gambit YES!!!!
24/09/2005 9:45:22 a.m. This is the girl... Very Nice!!! Thanks Deb. So are you!
2/09/2005 7:29:24 a.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 1 Very nice story.... Passed on to Cam for comment.
20/08/2005 8:17:30 a.m. Kimberly might not have been drunk WHAT????!!! Oh you DEVIL!! You have such talent for the suprising twist at the end!! I've read many many of your stories, but their always so damn hot that I forget your knack of thowing in those "OH MY GAWD" endings!! I gasp in shock, then laugh in glee. Gentle...you're the BEST!!! Shucks. Thanks!
12/08/2005 8:53:46 p.m. Hey gorgeous Love the dialogue, love the pace....as I've come to expect form you.....a very entertaining story. Thanks Gentle.... No Deb, thank you!
22/05/2005 10:19:23 a.m. Suddenly wide awake This was very cute, very hot, very clever. It took me a while to get around to reading it..... It was WELL worth the wait! It was worth the wait for that feedback too. Thanks.
11/03/2005 9:02:44 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 3 Wonderful continuation of an excellent story....can't wait to see what happens next. (Unzip...button...hell who cares, I'm to involved in all the action going on!!) Alys & Dom are wonderful Thanks Debra. You want to be in the next chapter? :-)
10/03/2005 6:47:21 p.m. Tiros and his Nemesis What a surprise. I didn't expect to like this....I'm not much for God's and Goddesses....but I enjoyed this very much! Thanks again for a wonderful afternoon break You know, that's the best kind of feedback. You didn't expect to like it, read it anyway, and found you did. You made my whole day, not just the afternoon!
20/02/2005 It starts with a castle Delightful!! Great verbal painting of time, place, the picture surrounding the events. I really enjoyed this..... the sneakiness, the slyness, then the honesty. Wonderful story! Thanks Debra... If only I can get the next bit working...
12/02/2005 Sleepy Well, Hank is certainly oblivious to what it feels like to be a woman...lazily masturbating on a beautifuly relaxed morning...half asleep, half awake. Unlike you Gentle Dear.... Once again...a beautiful job Pleased to assist, and thanks for disagreeing with Hank. He's a nice guy, but I don't always agree with him.
12/02/2005 Life What a beautiful story...... and the perfect setting. Nothing beats a hot tub in the rain!!! A perfect sensuous, erotic tale of people totally in love. Bravo!! Thanks Debra. Now get in the water! :-)
12/02/2005 The one with the jeans Excellent story! Loved reading about the techinique, feelings and release of a man. Also reminded me of a past acquaintence who claimed to regularly print out my very conservative picture to wank off to in the men's room at his place of business. *giggle* Oh... the flattery of it all~ *smile* You didn't include a pic for me to attach!
11/02/2005 It was sexual right from the start What a great story but the ending? What a shock! I didn't see that one coming at all! Oh, dear. Sorry Debra. Other people say that's the BEST part of it...
10/02/2005 Vivian Yes, Yes, Yes!!! You are a Wonderful writer! Expertly written in detail and conversation! Can't wait to read the rest of you!! Hey, isn't that two today? :-)
10/02/2005 Sleep Therapy Wonderful, Wonderful, Wonderful!!! I loved this story the best so far... Totally realistic.... Spritely banter between them... Fantastic ending! You know, you're a great audience.
9/02/2005 Next Time - Part 2 Once again... A Very Nice afternoon story..... Just the thing to perk up a slow afternoon at work~ hehehe Hmmm... :-)
2/02/2005 The Shower This story SOOO makes me sorry I missed going to college!! Thanks for the wonderfully tantalizing afternoon break~ Hey, this is a night time story! :-)
29/01/2005 The Swap Part 4 Wonderful, Wonderful, Wonderful!!!! The best I've read in a very long time....(and I'm quite an avid reader!) You are very talented!!! And that's the nicest feedback I've had in a while. Thank you so much.